beau soleil = belles fleurs

July 30, 2013 at 11:10 am 15 comments


high above she stares

down below her babies smile

Mother sun shines bright




little suns

Entry filed under: gardening, haiku, life, musings, nature, poetry, ponderings, thoughts. Tags: , , , , , , , , , , .

here a summer garnish

15 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Brian Hughes  |  July 30, 2013 at 11:22 am

    It’s shining a bit too bright for my tastes at the moment. I seriously wish it would rain.

  • 2. psychologypathology  |  July 30, 2013 at 11:40 am

    The symbology and images you use convey the sun and Mother perfectly. Great feeling; waht an accomplishment!

    • 3. words4jp  |  July 30, 2013 at 11:54 am

      thank you very much – that is very sweet of you to say. xx

  • 4. psychologypathology  |  July 30, 2013 at 12:05 pm

    Reblogged this on psychologypathology and commented:
    This perfect Haiku gave me exactly the feeling of the sun and the earth and flowers, as I sat with the doors open to the garden, and the summer sun beaming down through the fresh air onto the grass. It is the ultimate aim and endeavour of any writer to convey precisely and exactly what it is they are trying to express with words with an accurate and pinpointed use of reflexity and semantic awareness. I am no-one to do this, though I’d like to extend my sincere appreciation and congratulations to Kimberley ( Words4jp), on this little piece of perfection; a little star in the gamut of writing.

  • 5. Skye @ TheSanctuaryofMyHeart  |  July 30, 2013 at 12:07 pm

    Lovely !!!!!

  • 7. gita4elamats  |  July 30, 2013 at 2:50 pm

    Perfect! 😀

  • 8. coyotero2112  |  July 30, 2013 at 3:17 pm

    Wonderful ! Love the comment about wishing it would rain…two months ago all comments were wishing for sun and an end to winter. Interesting…

    • 9. words4jp  |  July 30, 2013 at 4:15 pm

      But of course. In a few months we will be wishing for hot sun again;)


  • 10. findingmyinnercourage  |  July 31, 2013 at 12:34 am

    : ) lovely!

  • 11. shylaj11  |  July 31, 2013 at 3:37 am

    You can send some sunshine my way. It would be greatly appreciated.

    • 12. words4jp  |  July 31, 2013 at 12:47 pm

      i would love to if i could – we are back to rain again. gee, the temps went down to 49 degrees the other night!

  • 13. misplacedbookworm  |  August 12, 2013 at 1:33 am

    I love the imagery of the sun and the flowers smiling at one another. It’s a very optimistic portrait of the world. 🙂

    • 14. words4jp  |  August 12, 2013 at 12:39 pm

      thank you:) when I run, I look for stories….

      • 15. misplacedbookworm  |  August 12, 2013 at 2:10 pm

        There’s a worlds of inspiration out there, and a lot of people look at it, but only a few see it. Great work. 🙂

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