here

July 29, 2013 at 4:17 pm 27 comments

whether i am working, running, cooking or cleaning.

you are here.

with me.

i can be driving – anywhere

cooking – anything

listening to any song.

you are here.

with me.

i can be shopping at a store,

eating a bite of food

or walking the dog.

you are here.

with me.

i can be looking up at the stars,

dreaming in my sleep

or doing nothing.

you are here.

with me.

how dare you invade

my every thought,

my every breath.

who gave you permission?

who said that you could?

remember this fact –

you left me,

you quit us.

so

go back to your life,

your world,

your dream –

go use someone else

and

stay far away

from

me.

Entry filed under: feelings, love, Personal, poetry, prose, Relationships, thoughts. Tags: , , , , , , , , , , .

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27 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Brian Hughes  |  July 29, 2013 at 4:20 pm

    For the first few lines I thought you were talking about my kitten.

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    • 2. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:09 pm

      Hahahaha – you are funny:)

      Reply
  • 3. psychologypathology  |  July 29, 2013 at 4:21 pm

    I love you’re words. Strange how some people can’t get away from each other. I don’t think it’s a choice. Some things are just like that.

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    • 4. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:09 pm

      I agree with you. It was a choice and now I wish it wasn’t.

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      • 5. psychologypathology  |  July 29, 2013 at 9:46 pm

        Overall my assessment is that you are luckY.

      • 6. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 9:56 pm

        May I ask how is it you came to this assessment?

        Sent from an 🍎 👀 device.

      • 7. psychologypathology  |  July 30, 2013 at 11:15 am

        I just think it is always lucky to be in a relationship.

  • 8. 1WriteWay  |  July 29, 2013 at 5:23 pm

    I like how you take thoughts that by themselves are assumed to be romantic and show us the flip side, the frustration of not getting over a broken relationship. Very nicely done!

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    • 9. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:06 pm

      Thank you very much for your very kind words. 🙂

      Reply
  • 10. ioniamartin  |  July 29, 2013 at 5:47 pm

    I have felt this way before. Much love to you, beautiful expression.

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    • 11. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:06 pm

      thank you for your very sweet words. how are you feeling?

      Reply
      • 12. ioniamartin  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:08 pm

        I’m doing much better:) thank you. How are you doing?

      • 13. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:10 pm

        okay – my kids went back to their dad’s yesterday so it is just me and my pooch. I miss them and dammit I miss ‘him’. One good thing is I am getting back into running again. i have something I am looking forward to again – as long as I do not think about him.

      • 14. ioniamartin  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:13 pm

        Running is very therapeutic. If you ever need to talk, readfulthings@gmail

  • 15. Svelte  |  July 29, 2013 at 7:38 pm

    Hah, I know it all too well…

    Reply
  • 16. psychologypathology2  |  July 29, 2013 at 8:06 pm

    for a time
    seeking my forever love
    who instead found me
    we drank from the well
    and hurled upon destiny
    daring to smite that
    which cannot be explained

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    • 17. words4jp  |  July 29, 2013 at 9:57 pm

      Beautiful words. Thank you.

      Reply
  • 18. findingmyinnercourage  |  July 30, 2013 at 3:35 am

    I love your ability to express your words ~ you were blessed with creativity!

    Beautiful, extremely well done~

    Reply
    • 19. words4jp  |  July 30, 2013 at 11:52 am

      thank you so much – i hope you have a good day;)

      Reply
  • 20. Noora  |  July 30, 2013 at 12:11 pm

    Touching piece. I feel your words. xx

    Reply
    • 21. words4jp  |  July 30, 2013 at 12:49 pm

      thank you. xx

      Reply
  • 22. Bonnie  |  July 30, 2013 at 5:42 pm

    Fantastic. Insightful. And yes, some people just can’t be removed from our thoughts…it’s a double-edged sword for sure. Love this…

    Reply
  • 23. Elia Bintang  |  July 30, 2013 at 11:52 pm

    This is very well-constructed. Hope you’re doing fine 🙂

    Reply
  • 24. Kavita Joshi  |  July 31, 2013 at 1:23 am

    lovely poem..love the feeling in it with all the emotions packaged in one poem

    Reply
  • 25. WB  |  July 31, 2013 at 3:03 am

    This began soft and evolved to intense. Great poem!

    Reply
    • 26. words4jp  |  July 31, 2013 at 12:56 pm

      Hi! I have missed you – thanks for reading and your words. 🙂

      Reply
  • 27. shylaj11  |  July 31, 2013 at 3:36 am

    Thoughts that take up our every waking moment can be overwhelming. Look after you. x

    Reply

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