Love in Ten Sentences

March 15, 2015 at 9:27 pm 25 comments

I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to Passion through Poetry for asking me to join the Love in Ten Sentences challenge. The challenge is as follows – write a poem about love consisting of 10 lines, each 4 words and the word ‘love’ must be one of the four.  At the end of the poem, include a favorite quote about love. When all is complete, challenge ten other bloggers to participate.   Here they are…


Words for my J,P and P

your eyes speak love.

your actions breathe love.

your heart beats love.

your smile radiates love.

your laughter sings love.

your love brings hope.

your love sustains me.

you embody my love.

you are my love.

my love is you.

“Convert my love into a soothing pain eraser.”

A quote from Jordan – my son.

Again , I would like to thank Passion through Poetry – – for a ‘lovely’ challenge!

Okay y’all – off to ‘love’ town you go!


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25 Comments Add your own

  • 1. hitandrun1964  |  March 15, 2015 at 9:41 pm

    Congrats and way to go Kim!!!

    • 2. words4jp  |  March 15, 2015 at 9:49 pm

      thank you – I found this to be a tough challenge. i am not one for following criteria – my scribbles are too free spirited to be boxed in to rules and regs:)

  • 3. Paul Handover  |  March 15, 2015 at 10:00 pm

    What a truly wonderful idea and many, many thanks for selecting Learning from Dogs as one of the ten.

    I will happily participate – just need a couple of days for the creative juices to pour out!

    • 4. words4jp  |  March 16, 2015 at 2:44 am

      Yippy – I cannot wait to see what the juices create:) 🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾

  • 5. passion through poetry  |  March 15, 2015 at 10:17 pm

    Hi, this is a wonderful post, and I love your heartfelt poem. Thank you so much for participating ❤

    • 6. words4jp  |  March 16, 2015 at 2:43 am

      Thank you. And thank you for challenging me. I am not very good at structured pieces. This was a bit of a puzzle for me – but I managed it by looking at a photo of my children. They are my true loves in life. ☺️

      • 7. passion through poetry  |  March 16, 2015 at 2:52 am

        That’s so wonderful, I struggle with structured poetry too, but though I’d take up the challenge 🙂

      • 8. words4jp  |  March 17, 2015 at 6:22 pm

        I would say you are wonderful at structured poetry;)

      • 9. passion through poetry  |  March 17, 2015 at 8:23 pm

        Thank you 💜

      • 10. words4jp  |  March 19, 2015 at 1:29 am

        you are welcome. 🙂

  • 11. Ms. Vee  |  March 15, 2015 at 10:38 pm

    This is a lovely love poem Kim! 🙂

    • 12. words4jp  |  March 16, 2015 at 2:40 am

      Thank you so much. xxxx

      • 13. Ms. Vee  |  March 16, 2015 at 12:05 pm

        You’re welcome! I hope all is well. Peace.

      • 14. words4jp  |  March 17, 2015 at 6:23 pm

        Thank you – I am busy. Trying to get used to a new job and my schedule – which is cutting into my blogging time;). xxx

      • 15. Ms. Vee  |  March 17, 2015 at 8:50 pm

        Best of luck on the new job! You’ll adjust to it all, and find time for blogging. ☺

  • 17. Ten lines speak love | Peace, love and patchouli  |  March 16, 2015 at 12:16 am

    […] Written to my lovely friend Kim in the form of a challenge, To play along one must post ten lines with four words each line with the word love in each… And challenge another ten writers to follow. I give you a pass but felt like playing along As my writer friend Kim is amazing and I apologize for not including others, but if you want to play along…here is where it all love…. Is where you shall find said challenge…original bestowed upon me by : […]

    • 18. words4jp  |  March 16, 2015 at 2:38 am

      This is absolutely beautiful. You are one of the few writers – only writers – which brings me to tears. Your words – your heart – touches mine greatly. Thank you. xxxxxxxxx

  • 19. ladysighs  |  March 16, 2015 at 10:56 am

    You are really good at this. What a challenge! I think one has to have known deep love to even know where to start. lol
    Thanks for inviting. 🙂

  • 20. justme792  |  March 16, 2015 at 9:19 pm

    So beautiful!

    • 21. words4jp  |  March 17, 2015 at 6:32 pm

      Thank you so much:).

  • 22. Brenda Davis Harsham  |  March 17, 2015 at 1:40 am

    wow, that’s a lot of love! Well done. 🙂

    • 23. words4jp  |  March 17, 2015 at 6:33 pm

      Thank you. I bought this was a real challenge to write – it would have been easier to post a picture of the three of them:). It was, however, a lot of fun to write. :). Thanks for reading.

  • 25. Noora  |  March 21, 2015 at 2:09 pm

    This is such a heartfelt tribute. Thank you very much for the challenge. I already started writing it, but found it pretty challenging. I’ll try again when I can focus better – busy with work.


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