Six Word Saturday #8

February 21, 2015 at 2:30 pm 19 comments

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“I gave you my shooting stars.”

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  • 1. Ron.  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:00 pm

    Not sure of the context, but who cares? I like it.

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    • 2. words4jp  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:50 pm

      Thanks!!! I was just commenting on it – I looked at with more a positive and matter-of-fact type of spin. But, one can see it to be the total opposite – a metaphor for regret and disappointment. Thanks for your lovely comment:)

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  • 3. Cara  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:22 pm

    I gave you my shooting stars and you shot them down, goddamn you.

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    • 4. words4jp  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:45 pm

      I so love writing these 6 word bits and seeing how people interpret what I have conceived – this is a great perception. Thanks!!

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      • 5. ladysighs  |  February 21, 2015 at 5:08 pm

        I like the SWS too. I think they really do tell more about us than a long essay. If after a year the 52 SWS were compiled ……. we’d probably burn it. LOL

      • 6. words4jp  |  February 22, 2015 at 2:55 pm

        I have been writing these for quite sometime. I just posted #55 on my tumblr!!

  • 7. restlessjo  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:41 pm

    Good job Ron asked the question! I was about to say ‘that’s nice of you’. Perhaps not 😦 More fish in the sea? I guess you liked that one though.

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    • 8. words4jp  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:49 pm

      This is awesome -thanks. I write these, so they can be perceived in many ways – different or similar – but all dependent on the mind who reads it. My thought was my children. My dreams are always for them – I find a penny and make a wish. It is for them – their happiness and health and finding their dreams. I know that it can also be looked at as giving someone something – a heart, dream, mind,….and they squander it or destroy it in some way. 🙂

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      • 9. restlessjo  |  February 21, 2015 at 3:51 pm

        I’m glad someone does this challenge in the way it’s intended. I’m afraid I’m a deviant 🙂 How old are your children?

      • 10. words4jp  |  February 21, 2015 at 4:15 pm

        Thank you so much:). As I said, it is fun to see what people come up with. My oldest son is 20 and my youngest is 17. 🙂

  • 11. hitandrun1964  |  February 21, 2015 at 4:09 pm

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  • 12. Kathe W.  |  February 21, 2015 at 4:37 pm

    nice six words!

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  • 13. Mlissabeth  |  February 21, 2015 at 6:23 pm

    It is all anyone’s perception… (I cheated and read the comments.)

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  • 14. middlegirl54  |  February 22, 2015 at 4:39 am

    YeeHaw

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  • 16. Noora  |  February 22, 2015 at 11:08 pm

    Wow – mere six words and yet this piece made me feel so nostalgic and contemplating this and that. Thanks for sharing.

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    • 17. words4jp  |  February 23, 2015 at 2:51 am

      You are so welcome:)

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  • 18. magicalmysticalteacher  |  February 28, 2015 at 3:25 pm

    Poetic words!

    Six Words and Shadows

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    • 19. words4jp  |  March 1, 2015 at 12:05 am

      Thank you. I do try…:)

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