under the stars – part 4
February 2, 2015 at 4:04 pm 17 comments
…
i can hear a single flute
as
it taps quietly through the air,
infused by the rhythm
of
a lightly tapped snare ~ ~ ~
~
what beautiful music to inspire
a ravishing moment
such as this ~
with each passing measure… lingering
you seduce me with your hands and a kiss ~ ~ ~
~ ~ ~
i can feel the warmth of your lips igniting
a current deep within
and
the touch of your fingertips
gliding ~ softly ~ along ~ ~ ~
the contours of my shoulders,
up along the nape of my neck
and slowly ~ caressing ~ my lips
before
sliding ~ your way
down to my breasts ~ ~ ~
~ ~ ~
i am so entranced by your presence ~
wanting only to be devoured
by
this feverish dance of desire
and
submit to your seductive powers…
…
to be continued…
…
(inspired by Maurice Ravel’s ‘Bolero’)
Entry filed under: dance, dreams, life, love, Personal, poetry, prose, sensual, thoughts. Tags: beautiful music, dancing, imagination, inspiration, loneliness, Relationships, to be continued.
1.
justme792 | February 2, 2015 at 4:08 pm
Love it! π
2.
words4jp | February 3, 2015 at 1:26 am
Thank you;)
3.
ladysighs | February 2, 2015 at 4:09 pm
I can really understand how Bolero could inspire this writing. It is slow and builds and builds. π
Please Continue. lol
4.
words4jp | February 2, 2015 at 4:11 pm
The first part is literally the piece of musicπΆπΆ
5.
ladysighs | February 2, 2015 at 4:13 pm
agree
6.
Neeraj (nekneeraj) | February 2, 2015 at 5:10 pm
It feels so warm to read this one. So much passion and desire in this poem. Can wait for it to continue.
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words4jp | February 2, 2015 at 11:43 pm
Thank you. I am working on the next part – it is a bit daunting because I am not used to writing in this particular genre.
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Dom DiFrancesco | February 2, 2015 at 7:29 pm
Gorgeous Kimberly, I love the passion of this piece. π
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words4jp | February 2, 2015 at 11:42 pm
Thank you so much. I am working on the next part….
10.
John W. Howell | February 2, 2015 at 8:29 pm
The pitch gets fevered (so to speak). Nice
11.
words4jp | February 3, 2015 at 1:22 am
Thank you. Maybe I should include an ice cold drink!
12.
John W. Howell | February 3, 2015 at 1:56 am
How about a pitcher?
13.
words4jp | February 3, 2015 at 3:42 pm
But of course;). Sorry, I forgot my manners:)
14.
georgeforfun | February 2, 2015 at 9:11 pm
Reblogged this on georgeforfun.
15.
Paul Handover | February 2, 2015 at 9:34 pm
More beautiful words from you!
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words4jp | February 2, 2015 at 11:41 pm
Thank you. π
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MichelleMarie | February 3, 2015 at 3:16 pm
OH wow! I love this reading it is so beautiful it flows just like that! β€