on a bridge ~

January 27, 2015 at 8:29 pm 22 comments

they stood quietly observing the city of lights,

as its reflection danced gently

in the river below

it was the end of the day,

all of the lamps were ablaze


the streets were slowly clearing ~

except for lovers walking


holding each other close…


Entry filed under: a story, dreams, feelings, imagination, life, love, Personal, poetry, prose, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: , , .

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22 Comments Add your own

  • 1. georgeforfun  |  January 27, 2015 at 9:47 pm

    Reblogged this on georgeforfun.

  • 2. hitandrun1964  |  January 27, 2015 at 11:30 pm


    • 3. words4jp  |  January 28, 2015 at 6:16 pm

      thank you – i know how much you love Paris:)

  • 4. globalunison  |  January 27, 2015 at 11:58 pm

    Kim, you always get me with your romantic side! It’s so refreshing 😀


    • 5. words4jp  |  January 28, 2015 at 6:14 pm

      thank you – i have one, though i never get a chance to use it. 🙂

  • 6. joeyfullystated  |  January 28, 2015 at 12:05 am

    I love this. It reminds me of a painting…

    • 7. words4jp  |  January 28, 2015 at 6:13 pm

      thanks – i was actually picturing the movie Sabrina. and Sex and City – Carrie and Mr. Big…..

      • 8. joeyfullystated  |  January 28, 2015 at 6:14 pm

        Very Fench for both of us, then 😀 –Great imagery!

  • 9. busymindthinking  |  January 28, 2015 at 1:21 am

    You’re on my mind tonight, so I came back to this post to send you love and hugs.

    • 10. words4jp  |  January 28, 2015 at 6:12 pm

      thank you so much:) you are sooooo sweet. i do appreciate it. xx

  • 12. cindy knoke  |  January 28, 2015 at 1:44 am

    lovely imagery~

    • 13. words4jp  |  January 28, 2015 at 6:11 pm

      thank you – i was thinking Sabrina and Linus – from the movie Sabrina:) One of my favorites.

  • 14. Felicity  |  January 28, 2015 at 12:11 pm


    • 15. words4jp  |  January 28, 2015 at 2:09 pm

      thank you – I do not typically write this way.

      i have recently been approached to guest blog and i am not certain if i can do it. most of the other guest blogger’s have written these beautiful pieces – kinda like articles – and sometimes they move into some sort of prose or poem. eek – it is freaking me out. i do not want to say no – i actually agreed – but i am paralyzed as to the writing. ughhh.

      • 16. Felicity  |  January 30, 2015 at 12:27 am

        I know that feeling! I’m not familiar with the ins and outs of guest blogging, but I think it’s quite an honor, so congrats! 🙂 But I get the paralysis, too. I don’t work well under pressure. Perhaps try the stream of consciousness exercise? Or approach it as though it were just another piece for your own blog; that’s likely what impressed them enough to invite you, so I don’t think you can go wrong 🙂 Send me a link when it goes up, I’d love to read it! Hugs 🙂

      • 17. words4jp  |  January 30, 2015 at 9:18 pm

        Thanks for your advice. I am thinking I will try your technique. I am in the middle of a serious personal matter right now, so I am having trouble writing, but then I do because I am desperate to get out of my head.

      • 18. Felicity  |  January 30, 2015 at 9:22 pm

        Best of luck to you hon. Often that’s the very best medicine 🙂

      • 19. words4jp  |  January 30, 2015 at 9:25 pm

        I am not certain, really.

      • 20. Felicity  |  January 30, 2015 at 11:22 pm

        If you ever need someone to talk to, I’m always willing to listen. You can email me privately felicityjohns@outlook.com. If you ever feel like an impartial ear might help 🙂

  • 21. thinkingpinkx2  |  January 29, 2015 at 5:16 am

    I wanted to tell you it’s MM. I love all your poems and always do. You have such a beautiful way with words and I love reading them. I’ve been meaning to tell you this! ❤ MM

    • 22. words4jp  |  January 30, 2015 at 12:20 am

      You are like James Bond. We can call you Agent Double M.


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