under the stars
January 15, 2015 at 2:14 pm 23 comments
…
I want to feel my body enveloped by yours ~
so close
I can feel your heart beat
channeling through my veins
and
the warmth of your chest kissing my cheek.
with fingers entwined
and
our lips feasting on kisses,
we can taste the urges
which
prey on our souls…
…
Oh what a moment this is…
slow dancing under the stars…
…
…
to be continued ~
…
Entry filed under: dance, dreams, feelings, life, love, Personal, poetry, ponderings, prose, thoughts. Tags: dancing, imagination, inspiration, loneliness, Relationships, to be continued.
1.
busymindthinking | January 15, 2015 at 2:26 pm
I can hardly wait for it to be continued!
2.
words4jp | January 15, 2015 at 4:26 pm
i am debating posting the other ‘5 parts’ – they were posted on my tumblr blog a few months back….not certain if i should here…:)
3.
busymindthinking | January 15, 2015 at 4:50 pm
Just my opinion, but if you touch even one heart, it is well worth posting. Huge hugs
4.
Morgan | January 15, 2015 at 3:50 pm
sigh … 🙂
5.
Morgan | January 15, 2015 at 3:50 pm
sigh … 🙂
6.
words4jp | January 17, 2015 at 2:54 pm
Part two is coming shortly….
7.
Morgan | January 18, 2015 at 6:20 pm
🙂
8.
Dom DiFrancesco | January 15, 2015 at 7:54 pm
This is incredibly wonderful and passionate, I just love it. 🙂
9.
words4jp | January 16, 2015 at 2:55 am
Thank you. There are 4 more parts.
10.
Dom DiFrancesco | January 16, 2015 at 3:16 pm
I can’t wait, this one was really well done. 🙂
11.
words4jp | January 16, 2015 at 4:22 pm
Thanks. It gets a bit more interesting.
12.
globalunison | January 15, 2015 at 9:52 pm
So Romantic… Waiting on the next part!
-Naima
13.
words4jp | January 17, 2015 at 2:54 pm
Yikes – I missed this comment – I am so sorry. I am just about to post the next part and had to check out the tags from part one and found this comment – sorry.
14.
globalunison | January 17, 2015 at 2:56 pm
No need to be sorry Kim :))
-Naima
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thehappyhugger | January 16, 2015 at 8:40 am
I agree with the other comments, very romantic 🌻
16.
words4jp | January 16, 2015 at 4:23 pm
Thank you;)
17.
Paul Handover | January 16, 2015 at 5:37 pm
Please, please continue with the other parts!
18.
words4jp | January 16, 2015 at 7:15 pm
No worries – I will…..
19.
LeProsey | January 19, 2015 at 3:30 pm
Love this. Lots x
20.
words4jp | January 19, 2015 at 7:23 pm
Thank you so much. Part 3 will be coming 🙂
21.
LeProsey | January 19, 2015 at 7:25 pm
I’ll keep checking in. Nudge me if I miss it.
22.
words4jp | January 19, 2015 at 11:46 pm
Tomorrow I will post it:) I hope you will like it.
23.
MichelleMarie | February 3, 2015 at 3:17 pm
I went back to read this from the 1st one! Oh yes! This dance could go on forever I think! Because you know you are so on the verandah! Balcony!