noisy, noisy, noisy

January 15, 2015 at 1:00 pm 14 comments


the thought of you


tip toes

through my mind.

~ instead ~

you clamor,

you stammer,

you stumble,

you stomp


i scream inside

to drown you out

~ ~ ~


all i ever get


a headache


a heartache


the desire


~ YELL ~






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further and higher under the stars

14 Comments Add your own

  • 1. ladysighs  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:05 pm

    Somebody needs to be taught some manners. (not you)

    • 2. words4jp  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:11 pm

      I wrote this driving home from work and laughed the entire time. it wasn’t directed to any one in particular – it could apply to a select few – including myself! i was actually picturing The Pink Panther tip toeing along….

      • 3. ladysighs  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:18 pm

        I hate or dislike when some idea or thought gets caught in my mind and won’t quit hammering. It’s usually the little things that do it. 😦

  • 4. madgirlmoon  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:05 pm

    I used to think and feel this way about my ex husband (s) lol. Now I don’t think or feel about them at all !!!! πŸ˜‰

    • 5. words4jp  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:09 pm

      Yes – I still have those thoughts about the ex-hubs – I am afraid we will always be connected in some way because of our boys… i wrote this as i was driving and laughing the whole time I wrote it:)

  • 6. MichelleMarie  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:14 pm

    I hate it when someone is rude like that! All yelling at your in your mind! Hey you, yoooohoooo! I love this! Have a super day

  • 8. ahhsioux  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:23 pm

    Response: not my circus, not my problem. Tenacity is my forte. The potter molds the clay. Resistance is non-acceptance of…


    Wanna play?

    I am with or without you! You kill me, therefore I expect nothing from you.

    This is my today’s daily mental chatter. I release, don’t hold it in, blame anyone, co-herse, talk in triangles, exhibit passive aggressive behavior. I’m dart on the bullseye baby! Love me or hate me for it . I ain’t changing this about myself– my strongest quality.

  • 9. busymindthinking  |  January 15, 2015 at 1:39 pm

    Embracing our emotions, whatever they are, is all beneficial, that we move forward…let it out! I’ll make tea for when you’re done and we can sit and chat. Huge hugs

    • 10. words4jp  |  January 15, 2015 at 4:22 pm

      thanks – that would be nice:)

      • 11. busymindthinking  |  January 15, 2015 at 4:48 pm

        Huge hugs, it’s a plan.

  • 12. bruisedbelly  |  January 15, 2015 at 2:25 pm

    Damn Noise. I understand this.

    • 13. words4jp  |  January 15, 2015 at 4:25 pm

      I actually wrote the Pink Panther in mind…..i was picturing him tip toeing like he does… then i thought about those damn other thoughts and the who’s who make all of the noise in my brain – kinda reminds me of a drunkard, or shall i say when my dad would come home. Sometimes, i have very vivid pictures in my head when i write and this was one of those times. All swirling in my head while sitting in traffic.

      • 14. bruisedbelly  |  January 15, 2015 at 4:32 pm

        LOL!!! Isn’t that funny how your mind works when you write. I most often have either a visual in my head or a song.

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