heed these instructions ~

December 5, 2014 at 2:56 pm 24 comments


you must want to hold on tight


want to never let go


she will turn and run away ~


she will run away fast

to save herself

from the hurt

which has already crippled





Entry filed under: advice, feelings, human nature, life, love, Personal, poetry, ponderings, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: , , , , , , .

binding, searing hold on ~ to let go ~

24 Comments Add your own

  • 1. bruisedbelly  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:03 pm


    • 2. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:23 pm

      maybe i need to wear a tag…

      • 3. bruisedbelly  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:25 pm

        Nobody needs to wear a tag!

      • 4. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:57 pm

        maybe a tattoo?

      • 5. bruisedbelly  |  December 5, 2014 at 4:05 pm

        Oh Yes!!! Everyone should have one of those, very personal, with a little story 🙂

  • 6. Yoshiko  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:38 pm


    • 7. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:58 pm


      • 8. Yoshiko  |  December 5, 2014 at 5:10 pm


  • 9. ahhsioux  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:48 pm

    And only one has found this key to Her heart..,

    • 10. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 4:00 pm

      one did, but he threw it away – so she ran…like the wind…

      • 11. ahhsioux  |  December 5, 2014 at 8:40 pm

        Ouch! She’s only a writing point to the Laveders. I see. Where is the satisfaction in this as a writer, musician. I simply do not understand how you can twist fiction into non-fiction for writers ego.
        This disturbs me greatly.
        I am a female writer AND I don’t pretend to be anything else.
        What the HELL.
        Throw away!!
        I dont have any respect for this kind of writing.
        You can ALL go to HELL with your fucked up keys!
        I hate this action in all your “little” people.
        I see why you don’t sleep.
        I’m an idiot to think that I enjoyed your folly.
        Jesus Mother of Mary.
        I need you but not in this way pal!
        Go comment on yourself!
        I’m REAL!!

  • 12. Dana Renee  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:51 pm

    Reblogged this on Message in a Bottle and commented:
    Women are not nearly as complex as men want to believe …

  • 13. Paul Handover  |  December 5, 2014 at 3:53 pm

    Wise instructions indeed.

    • 14. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 4:00 pm

      i believe they are:)

  • 15. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 4:02 pm

    wow, thank you for the reblog. i am honored, truly. they are quite simple, yet simple is always the hardest to follow. thank you again.

  • 16. Morgan  |  December 5, 2014 at 4:19 pm

    Thank You for this Powerful Verse. I Truly Appreciate Your Inspirations 🙂 Happy Friday and Have a Fantastic Week End~

  • 17. georgeforfun  |  December 5, 2014 at 6:16 pm

    Reblogged this on georgeforfun.

  • 18. crankygiraffe  |  December 5, 2014 at 6:22 pm

    I wish I could share this with certain people now… Very very true

    • 19. words4jp  |  December 7, 2014 at 4:50 am

      I recently broke up with someone – i wish i had these on me in the beginning. Can you imagine – like a contract ……;) or a tattoo!!

  • 20. ahhsioux  |  December 5, 2014 at 8:43 pm

    So she’s a cripple too huh?
    Another ouch!

    • 21. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 9:01 pm

      I am sorry if I upset you. What I write is real – I am writing about me and I chose to write about myself in the third person, and my comment was written in the third person and utilizing metaphor of which I do quite frequently. I chose artistic license – my own artistic license to write a piece about myself, of which is my right because this is my blog. If I have offended you or upset you in anyway, I apologize. Thank you.

      • 22. ahhsioux  |  December 5, 2014 at 10:04 pm

        It’s not your your right to offend the Sisterhood, Atistic license or NOT. I have. You are touching on a very deep subject to be in a confusing 3rd person. Why? Put yourselfnin the opposite gender and as the receiver of this take. Now HOW DO FEEL?

  • 23. hitandrun1964  |  December 5, 2014 at 11:11 pm

    Definitely a tattoo. Wonderful and it really helps.

    • 24. words4jp  |  December 5, 2014 at 11:22 pm

      A tattoo on my butt!


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