the emotional bit

September 5, 2014 at 3:15 pm 7 comments

it is

a tiny piece

of a bigger whole


it is

the largest piece

of this distorted soul


a piece which fuels

this soul to live,

is a piece

i wish

would not exist



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7 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Paul Handover  |  September 5, 2014 at 4:18 pm

    Please don’t mean that!

    • 2. words4jp  |  September 5, 2014 at 11:20 pm

      I will be honest and say I do. But I do know that it is who I am. They make me – me. So, I try to deal with them. I am not very good at that. 🙂

      • 3. Paul Handover  |  September 6, 2014 at 1:35 pm

        I suspect you don’t have a dog in your life; is that the case?

      • 4. words4jp  |  September 6, 2014 at 6:15 pm

        I do.

  • 5. Dom DiFrancesco  |  September 5, 2014 at 5:17 pm

    Dark and sad, but well expressed.

  • 6. hitandrun1964  |  September 5, 2014 at 10:37 pm


  • 7. Paul Handover  |  September 7, 2014 at 1:01 am

    Re your dog, it was just that I couldn’t ‘square the circle’ of you expressing, from time-to-time, your darker feelings and those feelings not being assuaged by the unconditional love your dog gives you. You don’t have to reply! 😉


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