in my room
September 4, 2014 at 2:15 pm 17 comments
~
in a room
blinded by darkness ~
there is
one heart beat
drowning in silence,
a voice
screaming to heard
and
a spirit
crying
~ ~
~
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Entry filed under: depression, emotion, feelings, life, loneliness, nightmares, observations, Personal, poetry, ponderings, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: darkness, fears, frustration, love, Poetry, sadness, voices, worries.
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Yoshiko | September 4, 2014 at 2:47 pm
For a shoulder to cry on
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2.
words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 2:19 am
xxxx
3.
Paul Handover | September 4, 2014 at 3:08 pm
Never forget there are many who admire, nay rejoice, the beauty and elegance of your writings.
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 2:19 am
Thank you so very much. Xxxx
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 2:28 am
I try not to. I appreciate your reminders. 🙂
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hitandrun1964 | September 4, 2014 at 3:33 pm
It’s hard to press ‘like’ because this is so sad.
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Paul Handover | September 4, 2014 at 4:57 pm
I felt the same way.
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 11:12 pm
xx
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 11:06 pm
Sorry. I have my dark moments and they seep out of my poetry.
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Chatty Owl | September 4, 2014 at 3:44 pm
A loud scream of a silent soul. How profound.
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 3:37 pm
I find silence – when I am alone is hard to handle. The weekends when my son is at his dad’s. The loneliness truly strangles me. Uh oh – there is a line for another piece…. Thank you for reading.
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Chatty Owl | September 5, 2014 at 3:42 pm
Dearest, its always a pleasure. And yes, i can understand it can be daunting to be alone, especially at the weekends, as you say. But it brings words out! It brings talent out! We are all grateful for that. Selfishly.
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 11:22 pm
Thank you:)
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InfiniteZip | September 4, 2014 at 3:52 pm
Sad yet beautiful piece, sending smiles and light to the dark room:)
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words4jp | September 5, 2014 at 3:35 pm
Thank you. I know I am dabbling in the dark….again. Your light is appreciated. xxx
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Dom DiFrancesco | September 4, 2014 at 7:31 pm
Sad and touching at the same time Kim, really nice.
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lumar1298 | September 6, 2014 at 2:21 am
Wow… Very touching…