take my hand…
August 26, 2014 at 2:43 pm 18 comments
ς
please take my hand
let us go for a stroll
along a very narrow path ~
a path which leads to a faraway place,
where my dreams were born to dance.
~
it is a quiet place,
barely room for two
and
it isn’t very bright ~
with a few cobwebs here,
a lot of dust over there
and
in desperate need of light.
~
there was a time when this place saw
nothing
but
that of wishes,
hopes
and
dreams ~
then along came death, sadness and pain
with the worst of it all, being fear.
~
time and again,
i have walked this path ~
to pay a visit to this place
but
i lost the desire to stay for long
and
after a while, simply lost my way.
~
i still do believe this place exists
though
it may not be clear to me
and
i want so much to walk this path ~
to dance ~ to dream ~ to breathe
~
so
~
if you could spare a minute,
an hour
or
two
i would be honored to hold your hand ~
because
with you
i believe
this path can be found ~
~ rediscovering love ~
the beauty of living life’s dance.
ς
ς
Entry filed under: dreams, feelings, friendship, hope, human nature, life, love, Personal, poetry, ponderings, prose, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: dancing, future, hope, inspiration, journeys, loneliness, Poetry, taking chances, voices.
1.
hitandrun1964 | August 26, 2014 at 2:51 pm
I hope you find it again. I’m not looking but I am hopeful for you.
2.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 6:00 pm
i can understand you not wanting to look, but, you never know right? on this path of our so-called life, there are always unexpected ‘things’ – one never knows what these things may turn out to be? xo
3.
Yoshiko | August 26, 2014 at 2:59 pm
You can find the beauty of living again
4.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 5:57 pm
it would be nice. i see it through the eyes of my boys and even little Pee, but i have trouble seeing it through my own eyes. someday….
5.
Yoshiko | August 26, 2014 at 6:29 pm
Someday
6.
Mytwosentences | August 26, 2014 at 3:00 pm
So beautiful. Holding hands down a path of rediscovering love when you thought you would never be on such a path again. The honor is with the one holding your hand. Such a moving piece.
7.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 3:17 pm
I am very honored you like it. ;). Thank you for your lovely comment.
8.
Paul Handover | August 26, 2014 at 5:05 pm
Can’t improve on Mytwosentences reply!
9.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 5:51 pm
Thank you so very much:)
10.
John W. Howell | August 26, 2014 at 3:01 pm
This path is very familiar to me and have walked it often. Well done.
11.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 5:56 pm
thank you – i hope to walk this path someday:)
12.
InfiniteZip | August 26, 2014 at 4:01 pm
His is beautiful my friend:) lovely and a nice quiet path too:)
13.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 5:56 pm
thank you so much:) i do hope to walk this path someday.
14.
syl65 | August 26, 2014 at 4:20 pm
Beautiful, K.
15.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 5:55 pm
Merci beaucoup. I am afraid I am not one to write of such a thing, that being my writing has a tendency to be a bit dark, but I felt a flash of inspiration and this was a gift of that inspiration.
16.
syl65 | August 26, 2014 at 7:51 pm
Dark or light, your words are appreciated. Also, Miss Pee is appreciated too 🙂
17.
Dom DiFrancesco | August 26, 2014 at 6:37 pm
Really lovely Kimberly. 🙂
18.
words4jp | August 26, 2014 at 8:01 pm
Thank you;) xx