June 12, 2014 at 2:40 pm 11 comments




wish to

close my eyes

and fade away

to a place unknown

far away from here

if only for

a moment

in my




sleeping Pee



Entry filed under: depression, dreams, etheree, life, nighttime, Personal, poetry, ponderings, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: , , , , , , .

an impending meltdown on wheels

11 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Mark Baron  |  June 12, 2014 at 2:51 pm

    Dreams are the starships of the mind,
    Unrestrained by the laws of life,
    Where we can search, and better, find,
    A chance escape from pain and strife
    Around, perchance, some distant star
    Where wonders blend with sweet desire,
    Where all we need is near, not far,
    And we are that which we aspire.
    So dream, sweet friend, and find your heart
    Eased by the visions that you see
    In that strange place, a world apart
    From here and now, from you and me,
    But pray, return, with hope to share
    Your dreams will always wait you there.

    • 2. words4jp  |  June 12, 2014 at 3:20 pm

      This is beautiful Mark. You have me crying tears – but warm ones and I am wearing a smile. Thank you. Thank you very much. This means more than you could ever know.

      • 3. Mark Baron  |  June 12, 2014 at 3:28 pm

        You are an amazing, sweet person – I see this in your words and the feelings that you share. A little poetry is something you deserve in life. I wish I could do more!

      • 4. words4jp  |  June 12, 2014 at 8:27 pm


    • 5. Paul Handover  |  June 13, 2014 at 12:06 am

      Mark, as Kimberley said: beautiful. Just been across to your own blog and love what I read! For others, don’t hesitate to go here:

      • 6. Mark Baron  |  June 13, 2014 at 2:10 am

        I am sincerely honored – thank you so much for these kind words!

  • 7. Julie Buhite  |  June 12, 2014 at 3:27 pm


    • 8. words4jp  |  June 12, 2014 at 8:27 pm

      Thank you. 😉

  • 9. Dom DiFrancesco  |  June 12, 2014 at 8:12 pm

    Pee clearly has succeeded in doing this. 🙂

    • 10. words4jp  |  June 12, 2014 at 10:38 pm

      don’t you wish you could drop anywhere and go zzzzzz…..I do:)

  • 11. Jonathan Caswell  |  June 12, 2014 at 9:00 pm

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:


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