rumination
May 16, 2014 at 2:19 pm 4 comments
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gazing at the ground
slab after slab of concrete
very hard and coarse
riddled in cracks and worn-out
truly what i see is – me
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Entry filed under: depression, feelings, humanity, life, Personal, poetry, ponderings, reflections, Relationships, tanka, thoughts, walking, writing. Tags: darkness, emptiness, fears, frustration, loneliness, outdoors, pain, sadness, voices, worries.
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The Presents of Presence | May 16, 2014 at 3:02 pm
No, you are not worn out concrete ~ you are vibrant, alive and beautiful. ♥ Sending hugs.
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MichelleMarie | May 16, 2014 at 6:13 pm
Awh sweet friend! I know this feeling! Just one big crack, not you but me. Life just plum wears you out. Sometimes I feel like a freak. Of course I know I’m not but that is how I feel sometimes. I think you are amazing. I thought of you first thing this morning while I was praying and meant to get to your blog. Now here I am, it’s lunch and I wanted to tell you that I believe in you, you are amazing. I know you can’t see it but I do. You are shining with your words. Now to check out your other post I meant to all day yesterday! 🙂 I’ve been so sad over Alex being sick I can barely stand it. love and hugs to you
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words4jp | May 16, 2014 at 7:07 pm
I am so sorry she is sick. She is one strong young lady and she has a mom that is there for her – giving her all that she needs. With you by her side, she can get through this. hugs to both of you:)
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Kirsten | May 20, 2014 at 6:02 pm
Ugh…I have had days like that. I can’t stand that worn out feeling. Keep writing it allows you to release all that emotion! You are a gifted poet who writes from your heart…amazing!