May 8, 2014 at 4:26 pm 10 comments


the observer does nothing

the doer destroys oneself

both strong and weak

one and the same



Entry filed under: abuse, addiction, depression, eating disorders, feelings, human nature, humanity, jorio, life, mental health, Personal, poetry, ponderings, reflections, Relationships, thoughts. Tags: , , , , , , , , .

artistic endeavor the inner voice

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  • 1. MichelleMarie  |  May 8, 2014 at 5:10 pm

    Girl I love this! Duality or Duplicity! A person that is duplicitous is conflicted within! This was/is me. Totally! It’s like this battle rages on! I totally love this! You are the first person that has ever used this word which is the coolest and now I get what you have been writing about! In a deep way! 🙂

    • 2. words4jp  |  May 8, 2014 at 5:19 pm

      thank you – i am afraid i feel like this more and more – just standing by watching myself destroy myself. it’s odd really.

  • 3. Kirsten  |  May 8, 2014 at 7:01 pm

    This poem reeks of truth!!

  • 4. Dom DiFrancesco  |  May 8, 2014 at 7:16 pm

    Sounds about right…we just can’t win can we. 🙂

  • 6. Rise above  |  May 8, 2014 at 10:22 pm

    You made me think, this will take some time to dissect.

    • 7. words4jp  |  May 8, 2014 at 10:24 pm

      Please – dissect away…… 😉

      • 8. Rise above  |  May 8, 2014 at 10:24 pm

        Scalpel in hand

      • 9. words4jp  |  May 8, 2014 at 10:25 pm

        Something for the pain, too. Please.

      • 10. Rise above  |  May 8, 2014 at 10:27 pm

        Nah, you gotta feel this

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