a reality

April 16, 2014 at 4:53 pm 11 comments



a resplendent moon above

dancing fragments glisten below

truth can be felt

of a fading heart




5:20am on April 16, 2014

Entry filed under: a moment, depression, feelings, iphoneography, jorio, life, observations, Personal, poetry, reflections, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: , , , , , , .

Wordless Wednesday – snow ‘passing over’ $1.00 for HumpH Day!

11 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Morgan  |  April 16, 2014 at 6:24 pm

    Quiet and Lovely 🙂 Right up my alley!

    • 2. words4jp  |  April 16, 2014 at 6:27 pm

      thank you – i stumbled on this – a self revelation:)

      • 3. Morgan  |  April 17, 2014 at 12:09 pm

        Those are always the best kind 🙂

      • 4. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 1:11 pm

        Thank you;)

  • 5. Neeraj (nekneeraj)  |  April 16, 2014 at 7:25 pm

    “Dancing fragments glisten below”. Beautiful.

  • 7. ItMatterstoGrey  |  April 16, 2014 at 7:58 pm

    fading hearts are sad…

    I like it, I love your formatting.

    • 8. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 2:33 am

      I agree. And thank you.

  • 9. Kirsten  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:38 pm

    exquisite…I love how you format your lines and phrases. It adds so much to the poem!

    • 10. words4jp  |  April 17, 2014 at 5:50 pm

      thank you. i do not try – it just happens. it just so happens that i read something that i wrote after it was beautifully critiqued by another set of eyes – who humanized it. i did not realize just how one dimensional i have become and i have to say it was a bit of a kick in the *ss. fast forward a few hours and walking Pee (she doesn’t walk, she sniffs) in the wee hours of the morning – i saw the moon reflected in the pond and voila – i saw me.

      • 11. Kirsten  |  April 19, 2014 at 11:39 pm

        Well, it happens because you are a talented woman! I don’t think of you as one dimensional at all!!

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