seesaw
April 4, 2014 at 2:27 pm 14 comments
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neither here nor there
teetering along an edge
take a seat – hold tight
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Dom DiFrancesco | April 4, 2014 at 3:39 pm
Sounds like we are in for a wild ride! 🙂
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words4jp | April 4, 2014 at 7:22 pm
well, we will see about that:)
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ItMatterstoGrey | April 4, 2014 at 4:17 pm
I see what you did there with the format….clever girl.
hold tight? is someone going to jump off while the other is at the top?
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words4jp | April 4, 2014 at 4:57 pm
Hah! Yes, one never knows if they may fall off!! I believe I have a few times;)
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MichelleMarie | April 4, 2014 at 5:05 pm
OH and if someone bumped their end hard on the ground you go flying off. I remember that well! I used to love to seesaw! Perfect little poem for Friday! I always hated the skinny boards. Now I probably need pillows! 🙂
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words4jp | April 4, 2014 at 7:21 pm
yes – i hated getting my backside bumped by the seesaw – the last time i sat on a seesaw was my friend Bill and i went down like a clump of lead. he laughed and i was sore!
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MichelleMarie | April 4, 2014 at 7:25 pm
OH my note to self~Don’t seesaw with Bill~:D LOL
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words4jp | April 4, 2014 at 7:34 pm
Oh, i could only wish – he is my guy who passed away – but, that is okay – he did it to my boys, too. i got a sore butt and they got a horrible case of the giggles. 🙂
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MichelleMarie | April 4, 2014 at 8:13 pm
Oh no! I am so sorry! Yikes talk about foot in mouth. It’s amazing how much you miss someone even the little annoyances you miss! Hugs so sorry I should watch my mouth! :O
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words4jp | April 4, 2014 at 8:22 pm
Do not watch your mouth;) I love your mouth!!! Well – you know what I mean…..!!
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MichelleMarie | April 4, 2014 at 10:37 pm
Yes! Hehe! 😁
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Kirsten | April 4, 2014 at 7:30 pm
Life often feels like that, doesn’t it?!? I tended fall of the seesaws…what does that say….lol
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words4jp | April 4, 2014 at 7:32 pm
wanna know something funny – this poem came from a line that popped into my head (yes, after self-analyzing) – “i am teetering on the edge of sanity”. then I thought insanity, then i thought a seesaw – very odd how that happens.
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Kirsten | April 4, 2014 at 7:48 pm
I’m always amazed how self-analyzing can help us write incredibly deep poetry that expresses our soul! I think this is a wonderful poem!