March 17, 2014 at 3:42 pm 6 comments



blood flowing through veins

swelling to a crescendo

erupt to the surface

need to feel alive



3-17 a

March 17 5:25am
moon over a frozen pond

Entry filed under: depression, feelings, jorio, life, love, mental health, Personal, poetry, ponderings, Relationships, thoughts, writing. Tags: , , , , , , , , , , , , , , .

sad songs my words

6 Comments Add your own

  • 1. From Acorn To Oak  |  March 17, 2014 at 3:46 pm

    Very descriptive! Potent. XX

  • 4. richardankerswrites  |  March 17, 2014 at 5:22 pm

    Very powerful

  • 5. Dom DiFrancesco  |  March 17, 2014 at 8:54 pm

    A lot said in these four lines, sad. I hope you are well my friend.

    • 6. words4jp  |  March 18, 2014 at 2:54 am

      I am existing. I feel like I am living in a vacuum. A few more days and I will feel better – what I hope for at least.


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