cracks

February 24, 2014 at 6:48 pm 12 comments

some scratch the surface

many run very deep

few can be repaired

all intensify my being

cracked ice

left wrist + black ice
=
impact zone

ps:  a jorio is a poem with four lines each containing four words.  inspired by A Shade Of Pen

http://ashadeofpen.wordpress.com/2014/02/19/first-jorio/

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12 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Teela Hart  |  February 24, 2014 at 7:25 pm

    I will parade my ignorance and say I didn’t know. I like it. Thank you.

    Reply
    • 2. words4jp  |  February 24, 2014 at 8:12 pm

      thank you very much for reading. 🙂

      Reply
  • 3. richardankerswrites  |  February 24, 2014 at 9:15 pm

    Very good

    Reply
    • 4. words4jp  |  February 25, 2014 at 12:50 pm

      thank you – I enjoyed writing it.

      Reply
  • 5. Jonathan Caswell  |  February 24, 2014 at 10:17 pm

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    OUCH…!!!!!

    Reply
  • 6. Pamela Beckford  |  February 24, 2014 at 10:34 pm

    I like this form – I may have to give it a whirl

    Reply
  • 7. ashadeofpen  |  February 25, 2014 at 4:00 am

    LOVED it immensely…

    Reply
    • 8. words4jp  |  February 25, 2014 at 12:47 pm

      Thank you. It was a bit difficult. My original thought changed completely – especially after I took the photo – of ice after I fell on it.:)

      Reply
      • 9. ashadeofpen  |  February 25, 2014 at 12:51 pm

        The picture is urs too?? It is beautiful… Worth all the effort you put into it

  • 10. Blog It Or Lose It  |  February 25, 2014 at 8:55 pm

    I hope your wrist is okay!

    Reply
    • 11. words4jp  |  February 25, 2014 at 10:56 pm

      It’s okay. Scraped and bloody but I lived!!

      Reply
      • 12. Blog It Or Lose It  |  February 25, 2014 at 11:50 pm

        Sorry. At least it wasn’t broken or sprained though – that’s nothing to mess with. I’m glad you’re okay.

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