the duelists

January 15, 2014 at 3:35 pm 14 comments

while standing on the front lines

looking over the fields ahead,

i see battle after battle


rivers flowing with the color of red.

some battles are nothing special –

just ordinary from beginning to end

while some are of epic proportions


without any knowledge of what lies ahead.

if i take a much closer look,

i see each battle as a duel between two souls…

two souls belonging to the same adversary…

two diametrical halves creating a whole.

this being is a worthy opponent,

an opponent i know all too well –

she can anticipate my every movement


easily lead me through the gates of hell.

the two halves of her make the whole of me


it is she

i resist everyday –

so many battles devoid of triumph…

doing my best to avoid the brunt of each fray. 

i am by no means a tactician


i have learned a thing or two…

through years of dueling against my opponent


walking daily in ‘her’ shoes


if i can manage to grab hold of the high ground


maintain a level head in which to fight,

i can stand high above my weaknesses


allow my courage


determination to take flight.


very poopie

not another duel with the camera…

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14 Comments Add your own

  • 1. penpusherpen  |  January 15, 2014 at 4:45 pm

    a duel worth fighting and gaining the upper hand methinks. xxPenxx

    • 2. words4jp  |  January 16, 2014 at 3:03 am

      Yes,I do agree…..sometimes…. Me thinks;)

  • 3. Apurva  |  January 15, 2014 at 4:47 pm

    wow! I love this poem 🙂

    • 4. words4jp  |  January 16, 2014 at 3:02 am

      Thank you so very much. xx

  • 5. Dom DiFrancesco  |  January 15, 2014 at 5:55 pm

    I love this piece Kimberly. Sometimes we are our worst enemies. 🙂

    • 6. words4jp  |  January 16, 2014 at 3:02 am

      Thank you. I have been struggling on the writing front. Sort of like writer’s block, but not quite. Maybe because so much stuff on the mind, which one would think would inspire writing but right now it seems to just hamper it.

  • 7. justme792  |  January 15, 2014 at 11:17 pm

    Wonderful poem, Kimberly!

    • 8. words4jp  |  January 16, 2014 at 2:58 am

      Thank you so much. 😉

  • 9. mixedupmeme  |  January 15, 2014 at 11:55 pm

    Just when you think the truce has been signed and peace is in sight, the duel begins again before the ink is dry.

    • 10. words4jp  |  January 16, 2014 at 2:57 am

      Yes – you are so very, very right!!

      • 11. Blog It Or Lose It  |  January 17, 2014 at 12:24 am

        But we are poets and authors and fighters and we have lots of ink and we’ll kick butt and win the battle. Nyah! So there!


        And when you’re down, think the following: “Hey, Chief. I might be wrong … but it appears that you’re fighting me again. This makes me feel … pissed off!”

  • 12. thebattlefieldwithin  |  January 18, 2014 at 7:14 pm

    I love love love this. I certainly wish I could gain the upper hand. Keep fighting, hugs xx.

    • 13. words4jp  |  January 19, 2014 at 4:06 am

      I am very happy you like this piece. Thank you for the inspiration. xx

  • 14. Wordifull Melanie  |  January 22, 2014 at 1:27 pm

    OH! Love this, it really resonates. I know I fight my other half… frequently. She is braver than me but I’m smarter 🙂 so it works out.


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