flames

October 28, 2013 at 2:15 pm 12 comments

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smell of burning wood

memories of winters passed

the touch of hot fire

lying next to his fireplace

fuel the dark flames of my hell

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10-26

sunset over Lily Lake
October 26, 2013

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Entry filed under: depression, feelings, insomnia, life, love, Personal, poetry, Relationships, tanka, thoughts. Tags: , , , , , , , , , , .

shadows just one

12 Comments Add your own

  • 1. deanabo  |  October 28, 2013 at 2:37 pm

    This has a lot of depth. Very good.

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    • 2. words4jp  |  October 29, 2013 at 1:52 am

      Thank you for the lovely comment. I very much appreciate it.

      Reply
  • 3. sheridegrom - From the literary and legislative trenches.  |  October 28, 2013 at 2:54 pm

    Exquisite. An amazing cozy start and ending with a twist in the gut. As always, a powerful piece of work.

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    • 4. words4jp  |  October 29, 2013 at 1:51 am

      Thank you. I hope you are well – 😉

      Reply
  • 5. richardankerswrites  |  October 28, 2013 at 3:20 pm

    Wow, awesome!

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    • 6. words4jp  |  October 29, 2013 at 1:50 am

      Thank you so much;)

      Reply
  • 7. mixedupmeme  |  October 28, 2013 at 5:28 pm

    Those darn memories. 😦

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    • 8. words4jp  |  October 29, 2013 at 1:49 am

      They suck. I know I should feel good and warm happy that I have these things but right now I hate them. When do they become warm and loving?

      Reply
  • 9. Svelte  |  October 28, 2013 at 8:26 pm

    So gutting and beautiful. My newest fave. x

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    • 10. words4jp  |  October 29, 2013 at 1:47 am

      Gutting – I like that word. Sometimes my writing evolves from a much deeper place – beyond my heart – yes – from the gut!

      Reply
  • 11. Wordifull Melanie  |  October 31, 2013 at 10:35 pm

    Very powerful and evocative.

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    • 12. words4jp  |  November 1, 2013 at 1:46 am

      Thank you. xx

      Reply

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