here
July 29, 2013 at 4:17 pm 27 comments
whether i am working, running, cooking or cleaning.
you are here.
with me.
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i can be driving – anywhere
cooking – anything
listening to any song.
you are here.
with me.
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i can be shopping at a store,
eating a bite of food
or walking the dog.
you are here.
with me.
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i can be looking up at the stars,
dreaming in my sleep
or doing nothing.
you are here.
with me.
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how dare you invade
my every thought,
my every breath.
who gave you permission?
who said that you could?
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remember this fact –
you left me,
you quit us.
so
go back to your life,
your world,
your dream –
go use someone else
and
stay far away
from
me.
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Entry filed under: feelings, love, Personal, poetry, prose, Relationships, thoughts. Tags: emptiness, frustration, loneliness, loss, love, memory, observations, pain, Poetry, sadness, worries.
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1. Brian Hughes | July 29, 2013 at 4:20 pm
For the first few lines I thought you were talking about my kitten.
2. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 7:09 pm
Hahahaha – you are funny:)
3. psychologypathology | July 29, 2013 at 4:21 pm
I love you’re words. Strange how some people can’t get away from each other. I don’t think it’s a choice. Some things are just like that.
4. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 7:09 pm
I agree with you. It was a choice and now I wish it wasn’t.
5. psychologypathology | July 29, 2013 at 9:46 pm
Overall my assessment is that you are luckY.
6. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 9:56 pm
May I ask how is it you came to this assessment?
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7. psychologypathology | July 30, 2013 at 11:15 am
I just think it is always lucky to be in a relationship.
8. 1WriteWay | July 29, 2013 at 5:23 pm
I like how you take thoughts that by themselves are assumed to be romantic and show us the flip side, the frustration of not getting over a broken relationship. Very nicely done!
9. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 7:06 pm
Thank you very much for your very kind words. 🙂
10. ioniamartin | July 29, 2013 at 5:47 pm
I have felt this way before. Much love to you, beautiful expression.
11. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 7:06 pm
thank you for your very sweet words. how are you feeling?
12. ioniamartin | July 29, 2013 at 7:08 pm
I’m doing much better:) thank you. How are you doing?
13. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 7:10 pm
okay – my kids went back to their dad’s yesterday so it is just me and my pooch. I miss them and dammit I miss ‘him’. One good thing is I am getting back into running again. i have something I am looking forward to again – as long as I do not think about him.
14. ioniamartin | July 29, 2013 at 7:13 pm
Running is very therapeutic. If you ever need to talk, readfulthings@gmail
15. Svelte | July 29, 2013 at 7:38 pm
Hah, I know it all too well…
16. psychologypathology2 | July 29, 2013 at 8:06 pm
for a time
seeking my forever love
who instead found me
we drank from the well
and hurled upon destiny
daring to smite that
which cannot be explained
17. words4jp | July 29, 2013 at 9:57 pm
Beautiful words. Thank you.
18. findingmyinnercourage | July 30, 2013 at 3:35 am
I love your ability to express your words ~ you were blessed with creativity!
Beautiful, extremely well done~
19. words4jp | July 30, 2013 at 11:52 am
thank you so much – i hope you have a good day;)
20. Noora | July 30, 2013 at 12:11 pm
Touching piece. I feel your words. xx
21. words4jp | July 30, 2013 at 12:49 pm
thank you. xx
22. Bonnie | July 30, 2013 at 5:42 pm
Fantastic. Insightful. And yes, some people just can’t be removed from our thoughts…it’s a double-edged sword for sure. Love this…
23. Elia Bintang | July 30, 2013 at 11:52 pm
This is very well-constructed. Hope you’re doing fine 🙂
24. Kavita Joshi | July 31, 2013 at 1:23 am
lovely poem..love the feeling in it with all the emotions packaged in one poem
25. WB | July 31, 2013 at 3:03 am
This began soft and evolved to intense. Great poem!
26. words4jp | July 31, 2013 at 12:56 pm
Hi! I have missed you – thanks for reading and your words. 🙂
27. shylaj11 | July 31, 2013 at 3:36 am
Thoughts that take up our every waking moment can be overwhelming. Look after you. x