shall we?

July 23, 2013 at 1:06 am 19 comments

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patiently she stands

an invitation to dance

his light exudes strength

she summons him with arms wide

reaching for her partner’s hand

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purple daisy

Mr. Sun – Shall We Dance?

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19 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Pamela Beckford  |  July 23, 2013 at 1:09 am

    I love this 🙂

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    • 2. words4jp  |  July 23, 2013 at 1:11 am

      thank you so much:) Oh My – I saw that you re-blogged it – I am honored Pamela – thank you. xxx

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      • 3. Pamela Beckford  |  July 23, 2013 at 1:13 am

        I really do love this. It brought a mental image that made me smile

      • 4. words4jp  |  July 23, 2013 at 1:28 am

        🙂

  • 5. Pamela Beckford  |  July 23, 2013 at 1:10 am

    Reblogged this on Year 'Round Thanksgiving Project and commented:
    Isn’t this lovely? I can just visualize this

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  • 6. Green Embers  |  July 23, 2013 at 1:32 am

    I love this too! Pamela beat me to it! So pretty. Hope things are going well, running coach! 🙂

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  • 7. shylaj11  |  July 23, 2013 at 2:12 am

    Oh how I wish for the sun to be back here. Beautiful!

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  • 8. Dom DiFrancesco  |  July 23, 2013 at 2:53 am

    Great poem, I didn’t see where this one was going at the start. I love it as well. 🙂

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    • 9. words4jp  |  July 23, 2013 at 3:16 am

      When I saw this flower I immediately thought pas de deux. It actually took me quite sometime to get what I was looking for.

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  • 10. findingmyinnercourage  |  July 23, 2013 at 4:07 am

    I’m jumping on the “I love this” bandwagon! It was so easy to visualize from the beginning!

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  • 11. gita4elamats  |  July 23, 2013 at 5:20 am

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  • 12. Brian Hughes  |  July 23, 2013 at 8:45 am

    “You dancin’?” “You askin’?” “I’m askin'” “I’m dancin'”

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  • 13. ur'damage  |  July 23, 2013 at 11:37 pm

    love this!!!

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    • 14. words4jp  |  July 24, 2013 at 12:16 am

      Thank you so much;)

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  • 15. Raven Whyte  |  August 19, 2013 at 12:31 am

    in molten beauty he stands

    appraising her worth

    her light, silver shadiows

    summoned by her mystique

    as he extends his hand

    Mistress Moon – we shall!

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    • 16. words4jp  |  August 19, 2013 at 3:06 am

      This is beautiful;)

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      • 17. Raven Whyte  |  August 19, 2013 at 6:14 am

        it just seemed waiting to be said, I am glad you liked it. It would not have existed if you had not written the first half.

      • 18. Raven Whyte  |  August 19, 2013 at 6:14 am

        and thank-you.

        sorry, I forget to say that sometimes.

  • 19. Lunch Sketch  |  August 20, 2013 at 12:02 pm

    Beautiful Kimberly 🙂

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