words

June 29, 2013 at 2:14 pm 22 comments

¨

my words sometimes sting.

my words sometimes bite.

there is really no excuse

or

justification as to why.

¨

i certainly do know better;

how to be courteous and kind

but

there are times when the stinger pokes out –

as if it ‘needs’ to speak its mind.

¨

this nasty little weapon

that lives inside of me –

is neither a friend or a foe.

‘they’ simply co-exist

to play

quite foolishly.

¨

my heart loves and forgives

yet still struggles deep inside.

– in conclusion – 

i am someone who should shut up

and

essentially hide.

Entry filed under: conversation, feelings, human nature, life, Personal, poetry, ponderings, thoughts, words. Tags: , , , , , , , , .

p.m. rush hour missing you

22 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Dom DiFrancesco  |  June 29, 2013 at 2:24 pm

    Don’t ever shut up or hide we would miss you too much. 🙂

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  • 2. Hera  |  June 29, 2013 at 2:30 pm

    I agree, to shut up and hide would be a sad time for all. But i do understand the feeling, sometimes we all wish we had done just that.

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  • 3. gita4elamats  |  June 29, 2013 at 3:38 pm

    No, no, no, don’t shut up nor hide! 🙂

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  • 4. penpusherpen  |  June 29, 2013 at 3:44 pm

    Oh no, never change yourself, I hear myself sometimes and wonder, but then, I think to myself, ’tis me, accept it. We say the truest words when we don’t consider what we say. xx

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  • 5. deadpoetdormis2  |  June 29, 2013 at 7:16 pm

    just remember no matter what you may say out of internal hurts – those who love you will continue to love you. Those who don’t – never did in the first place…

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  • 6. John W. Howell  |  June 29, 2013 at 7:44 pm

    We like what you do so keep doing it.

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    • 7. words4jp  |  June 29, 2013 at 9:48 pm

      Thank you;). xx

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      • 8. John W. Howell  |  June 29, 2013 at 9:56 pm

        I should have at least said “please.”

      • 9. words4jp  |  June 30, 2013 at 8:13 pm

        🙂

  • 10. invisibleme  |  June 30, 2013 at 1:02 am

    Do not shut up and hide!! You are my Muse you can’t leave! lol That was my selfish attempt at a joke. But seriously, please don’t leave your poems always touch me in one way or another. I think we all have that stinger that comes out to attack every now and again. Unfortunately, the stinger can sometimes be provoked. I really hope you stay here with us…you would be sorely missed!

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    • 11. words4jp  |  June 30, 2013 at 2:02 am

      Hey there. You needn’t worry about me going anywhere. My silence is more about me not communicating with someone that I love more than life and who has quit on me due to his

      Sent from an 🍎 👀 device.

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    • 12. words4jp  |  June 30, 2013 at 2:06 am

      Hit sent before i was done. It is complicated. But I have developed a snarky mouth that is truth, but I suppose some people do not like the truth. xx

      Sent from an 🍎 👀 device.

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  • 13. keladelaide  |  June 30, 2013 at 11:17 am

    Snarky sometimes makes me feel better. Speaking your mind can be liberating.

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  • 14. WB  |  July 1, 2013 at 12:41 am

    Do not hide, you would only be hiding from yourself. Great post.

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    • 15. words4jp  |  July 1, 2013 at 2:09 am

      Thank you for reading. I know hiding is not a good thing but sometimes I really should. But when it comes to my writing – this voice I cannot silence.

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      • 16. WB  |  July 1, 2013 at 2:31 am

        That’s good.

  • 17. mindretrofit8  |  July 1, 2013 at 1:59 am

    These “words” definitely feel familiar. You captured such great emotion and flow with this.

    “this nasty little weapon

    that lives inside of me –

    is neither a friend or a foe.

    ‘they’ simply co-exist

    to play

    quite foolishly.”

    Oh, how these truly resonate. 🙂

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    • 18. words4jp  |  July 1, 2013 at 2:07 am

      Thank you very much. You are very sweet. I suppose we all have a snarky side – mine is one I embrace sometimes a bit too often. But for me it is truth – and some people care not to hear the truth.

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  • 19. limseeyee  |  July 1, 2013 at 9:04 am

    WOW!!!
    AMAZING!!!
    Mind follow me too??
    =)

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    • 20. words4jp  |  July 1, 2013 at 12:14 pm

      Of course:)

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      • 21. limseeyee  |  July 2, 2013 at 6:34 am

        Thanks.

  • 22. anonyme2013  |  July 3, 2013 at 10:25 pm

    You send “stingers” and I send “zingers”…oh how words can get us into trouble! One day our hearts will stop struggling because we will find that peace we’ve been looking for all these years!

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