a window

June 24, 2013 at 12:14 am 14 comments

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blue piercing straight through

a lens opens a window

soul which lives no more

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my eyes

Entry filed under: feelings, haiku, life, Personal, poetry, thoughts. Tags: , , , , , , .

a curse the forecast

14 Comments Add your own

  • 1. psychologypathology  |  June 24, 2013 at 12:38 am

    Such beautiful eyes. So meaningful.

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  • 3. anonyme2013  |  June 24, 2013 at 1:42 am

    The eyes are the windows to our souls. Yours will LIVE again! Sending your strength and hope! xoxo

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  • 4. gita4elamats  |  June 24, 2013 at 2:43 am

    {{{HUGS}}}

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  • 6. invisibleme  |  June 24, 2013 at 5:53 am

    I can feel the pain in this one. Your soul is wounded right now, but it will soar again…both of ours will soar again! Hugs

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  • 7. Yo Lonce  |  June 24, 2013 at 9:34 am

    Very deep words and eyes
    Hugs ya x

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  • 8. merbear74  |  June 24, 2013 at 11:58 am

    Love ya chickie..xx The great thing about us humans, we are resilient. Keep writing…those eyes will smile again..

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  • 9. keladelaide  |  June 24, 2013 at 12:36 pm

    I hear the hurt in your words but I see determination in those eyes. ♥

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  • 10. unlovingyou  |  June 25, 2013 at 12:43 pm

    only takes a few words, and yet i fully feel your pain. gorgeous eyes xo

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    • 11. words4jp  |  June 26, 2013 at 12:15 am

      Aw shucks. Thank you. I have been thinking about you. I had this idea – when life settles – (as if;) you should go back to writing BUT change the title and write about other things. I think it is great you have moved on – I do miss your writing. You have a beautiful way with words.

      I will email you soon – I know you have been busy with the nest thing;)

      xx

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      • 12. unlovingyou  |  June 27, 2013 at 1:30 am

        it’s a great idea…to change the title etc. one i am seriously considering. once i am ready to delete my other writings, i may just make it a blog about “me”
        how are you doing? i miss coming here. i am just so wiped out these days!!! you are sweet…thank you for such a nice compliment 🙂

        xoxo

      • 13. words4jp  |  June 27, 2013 at 8:17 pm

        I bet you are wiped – and you need to save your strength little missie:)

  • 14. penpusherpen  |  June 26, 2013 at 2:32 pm

    I used to stare , and wonder, who’s there? Is there a soul, making me whole? or something apart, breaking my heart… xx

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